I love the roughness of this piece. I think the intense, bold colors and dark shadowing and outlines you used fit their relationship dynamic and characterisation perfectly. This is just a stunning piecce.
wow this is a really nice work ! very expressive and intensive, it has such a strong feeling and tension .,... The contrasts and the simple color give such a impression !!! *_* wow I love it, really nice job. maybe the movement look a bit not too fluent but still y can add even more tension to the situation.